I do really like this drawing. I meant, it's pretty difficult to draw humans, but with this one, you make it look pretty easy.
In this drawing, i specially like his robes, the "like a sir" expression and the armour.
Sorry, i tend to be rather vague, let's focus on the critique.
Vision: 5 stars I don't know what "vision" means, but i really like this drawing, that's why I rated it with a 5/5.
Originality: 1,5/5. I am sorry, but there's nothing to worry about. I meant, all my works woulf be rated like this one, why? Because this is not your exclusive content, as pokemon is not my exclusive content.
Technique: 5/5 stars. You totally respected your own technique and you didn't made any ridiculous attempt to try to change it, you know that your technique is good. And that's awesome.
Impact: 4/5. The "like a sir" makes it more "impactant-ness", but maybe you should think on addind backgrounds next time.
So good job and keep like that!